Escape from Kraznir

This term we have been writing an adventure/fantasy story called escape from Kraznir. Escape from Kraznir is about five spy's four predetermined and one who we got to chose. My character is called Johnyboy, the other four are littlejane who is a hobbit and really fast who has a dagger. The second one is a wizard called Touchfire who can throw fire then there's a warrior called sarason and lastly a dwarf who is called Athor. Here is the third chapter from my story.


“aaaaachooe” sneezed touchfire “Is hsass sas sblosceds snose” (i have a blocked nose) said touchfire. 

“Urgh” littlejane said “your disgusting” she then walked away but was not looking where she was going and fell off a ledge and into a prickle patch. “AHHHHHHHH” she screamed as she was falling her hands went into a perfect dab.
“I'd give that a five out of ten” said sarason.
“Shut up” said littlejane “i’m in pain”
“LOL” said sarason

“Stop fighting kids” johnyboy told them
“Anyway there’s a boat up ahead”

“Achoe” touchfire snesed fire and burnt the boat.
“Wow really professional” Athor commented.
“Never mind start fighting again kids” said johnyboy
“I’m Dyiiiing” said littlejane.
“No your not” said touchfire (whose cold went away)
“Yes i am,i cut myself on a prickle and i’ve been killed”.
They look over their shoulders and see littlejane who has managed to decapitate herself on a prickle.

Three and a half hours later …

“Wait” called out johnyboy
“Shhhhh!” said everyone else
“And so the moment of silence is over you can now talk” said Touchfire (who is a priest).
“I know how to get across the water” johnyboy said after the funeral “ I can make the water turn to ice and we can walk and push the supplies over the water”. And so the four heroes walked across the ice towards the desert.